Rough cut 2

Here is our second rough cut of the whole trailer there are still things needed to be done however:
1) Add in the background music.
2) Add sound of thumping when abductor is coming up the stairs.
3) Re-shoot the scene of me and Jeni on the field as there is equipment in the shots.
4) Add Titles at the beginning of the trailer.
However even though they are still things needed to be done, overall this rough cut is much better then that of the first. We used a different camera so the quality is much better which makes the trailer look more professional already. We also made it a lot quicker and jumpier and building the tension up more and more. The feedback that we gained from the new trailer was very good people said the trailer built the tension up straight from the start and the transitions for slip to slip were very good. The only things they said bad against the trailer was that it needed the music and to re-shoot the clips we already new we had to do.